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PostSubject: atori's awesome thread   Thu Jun 04, 2009 10:41 am



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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Thu Jun 04, 2009 10:57 am

I think it's med-high bunny slope. Its kinda smooth, but there is little easing, a bit of jerrkyness on the stand-up, and stiffness.

Overall, it's pretty good. 3 times better than people on youtube >_>


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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:19 pm

so wut is mah rank C
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:32 pm

It's a good bit better. It's still a little jerky, but good easing! You're SO CLOSE to beginner, that jerkyness is really gettin' ya.

The jerkyness is in the arm higher up when it dodges the ball. The second jerkyness is getting hit, he jumps into the flying position.

The flying position is also stiff. Solving the jerkyness/stiffness will get rid of each other.

Sorry, but the best I can say is High-High bunny. if you fix the anim, it might get you to beginners'. Good luck! =D
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:05 pm

Low Bunny

No easing, incredibly stiff, so yeah...


Rupert, you just basically insulted him right in the face with a terrible rank. If you do so, at least provide some CC saying how he can improve on those. -1 reputation for you, I'd expect better from an admin. ~Kumquat

Just because I'm an admin, doesn't mean I have to be nice.

This isn't about being nice. It's about giving actual cc and learning the ranks before you start shouting "LOW BUNNEH" everywhere. Did you even read Saronn's post? He MADE the ranks. I think he knows them better.

Did you also read when Saronn said that the ranks are exactly the same as PA's except a different name? Also, I didn't shout, "LOW BUHHEH". Gawd, quit editing my post.

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med-high beginner in PA is about low-beginner on AC
Bunny hill is lower. Did you even look at the borderline animations? Gawd.

That quote didn't prove your point at all. All that did was make my rank even lower. Get the hell out of my post.


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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:50 pm

wut r u talking about rupert!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jun 22, 2009 9:36 am

K, Ima help youz. cherry

Easing is when you start a car. It doesn't immediately reach top speed, it speeds up gradually. When it stops, it doesn't immediately come to a complete stop, it slows down before it stops moving. You need to incorporate this into every one of your movements. This is a representation of it, with '-' being the amount of movement and 'l' being the frames.

Bad easing: ll---l---l---l---l---ll
Good easing: ll-l--l---l----l----l---l--l-ll

Stiffness is how stiff and fixated your stick figure looks. You need to move EVERY SINGLE JOINT in EVERY SINGLE FRAME.

If you want to, I can be your mentor. Just give me your MSN or GMail.
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:40 am

k kumquaticus my msn is stantonjay@live.com Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:45 am

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:46 am

pretty cool eh?

saaron showed me the fad =D
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:18 am

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Tue Jul 21, 2009 10:44 pm

hey can some one plzz post
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sat Jul 25, 2009 9:27 pm

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sat Jul 25, 2009 11:47 pm

Nice fullbody. Hard to animate, but you did good for one.


Good job.

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sun Jul 26, 2009 1:05 pm

So, does that mean you are ranking me up?! Very Happy Oh, pease rank me up!
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Sun Jul 26, 2009 1:33 pm

By the way why dont i get ranked up? Im just as good as Dark Flame!
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:33 am

I'm sorry, you're not beginners yet. You still got a little stiffness, but easing is mostly the problem.

Work on your easing, and I'll see what I can do.

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:28 pm

Thanks Rupert can I use other types of animating systems?
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:07 pm

I'm sorry, all other animating programs need to be posted on "Freestyle." They won't get ranked.

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:26 pm

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:34 pm

Will this get me to beginners?
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:37 pm

Not quite yet.

You almost got it. Just add a little more easing and you're good to go.

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:40 pm

Awesome! So should i use fullbody next time or what?
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Mon Jul 27, 2009 11:02 pm

Your choice.

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:42 am

Ok then I'll use my base. what would be the best animation to rank me up?
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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Tue Jul 28, 2009 8:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:47 pm

Please post the gif.

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:13 pm

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PostSubject: Re: atori's awesome thread   Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:35 am

Way too stiff in the legs. Try making them bend more.

Your easing is too off also. Do you know what easing is? I'll explain is not.
Also, when you fix the stiffness in the legs, ease that too.



You need to bend the back more too.

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